✅یک نمونه پاسخ در سطح نمره 7 نوشته شده توسط مدرس آیلتس با نمره 8 رایتینگ برای سوالی که قبلا از کمبریج آیلتس 9 تست 1 مطرح شد 👇👇👇

The field of education has always been a source of controversy. While some argue that pupils benefit more if a second language is taught during the first few years of education, instead of the secondary school, others disagree. (39 words)

There are obvious benefits when students in their very first years are asked to learn a foreign language. First of all, there is less embarrassment for them since they are not criticized by their peers. Students in primary school do not form small groups to exclude other classmates. This sense of belonging to a larger group of the whole classroom helps them practice the language they are supposed to acquire. Moreover, it is widely believed that it is in human nature to learn a language without much effort at the very first years of life. By the time they are teenagers, this precious ability is long gone and much more enthusiasm and commitment is required to produce the same results. (120 words)

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