"The fire I had lit was completely extinguished and the room was now completely dark." The action of lighting a fire came before it was extinguished.

The sentence is grammatically correct, but it can be modified for clarity. A possible modification is: "As I stepped into the room, which was completely dark as the fire I had lit had been extinguished, I noticed two red dots blinking in the corner of the room."

"The fire I lit, was subsumed by the darkness, as I went int th room, I saw the two res dots gleaming in th corner"

When I entered the room ,
, I found it engulfed in darkness . The fire that was lit; now extinguished . Despite the pervasive darkness , I
noticed two red dots blinking in the corner of the room .

The fire I had lit was extinguished leaving the room in a complete darkness. Stepping inside, I saw a gleam of red dots blinking at the corner of the room.

This sounds more wattpadish.

The sentence is grammatically correct. however i have suggestion to write the same as:


"As I stepped into the dark room, the fire I lit had been extinguished, leaving the room completely devoid of light. However, my eyes caught two red dots blinking in the corner, emanating from a small device on the floor."

In a completely darkened room, The fire i lit was extinguished. as i step in blinking red spots were seen in the corner of the room.

because you were blind

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